Holli FanFic Draft - Please comment.

Alice was chucked through the door and landed with a hard knock on the cold floor, the men walked in behind her.

From the floor, she slowly lifted her head, her blurry eyes rose until she saw him and his figure focused in her sight.

“Mad Hatter” is what they call him. He sat calm and still at the table. A fog of white smoke glazed around him. From her bruised eyes she could just make out the poker cards gripped in his fingers. Although his cold, heartless eyes were hidden behind the shadow of his giant purple hat, she could feel him watching her…

“Alice” -He spoke without moving, instilling deep fear into Alice with his cold and broken voice. She looked down and began to shake.

“Alice, did you really think you could escape from Wonderland…”

He said this as if it was not a question, and it wasn’t. No one had EVER escaped from Wonderland. You would be crazy to try. Once you came to Wonderland, your body didn’t belong to you anymore, it belonged to them. It belonged to Hatter.

Alice had found her way to the sanctuary of Wonderland just as all the other girls: young, addicted and desperate.

Their bodies used up and sold. They weren’t prostitutes, they were property, merchandise bought and sold at the will of Hatter. Slaves to their addictions.

Wonderland was their sanctuary of supply but also their prison.

Mushrooms, Potions, Teas, Bongs, Tablets, Trips every substance and psychedelic, to stretch you, grow big or small, to make you see or not see, to make you speed so you’ll never be late or to stop time altogether.

…But worst of all… the White Rabbit. White Rabbit lead you to a deep, dark hole, empty and evil. It was a drug so wicked the moment you inhaled the thick white poison, you became immortal, but cursed. Slaved to the drug, for if you ever stopped taking it, you would die.

White Rabbit smoke released in slow, dense circles from Hatter’s mouth.

He stood up.

Alice’s heart began to race as he paced his way towards her, eyes still hidden by his giant hat. He took his last step right before Alice’s face, and stood. Alice shut her eyes tight.