Brief weeks 1- 5
FanFiction Review No. 1
I consider the vampire diaries to be one of my favorite television show of all time. While reading this I was very unimpressed by the language used by this author, as it was very underdeveloped. The story was completely all over the place, which I didn’t like at all. The beginning started off very well as it was sticking to the storyline, but once you get into the middle of the story you find yourself lost as the author unexpectedly jumps form character to character, thus introducing different stories which have nothing to with the main one
I love that you're not afraid to fully thrash someones Fanfic haha.
ReplyDeleteI agree, after reading this myself the writing is a bit all over the place and isn't compelling in the slightest in my opinion. Too much dialog and not enough description about the situation, characters or setting.