Holli's Review 3

http://www.fanfiction.net/s/5715505/1/When_6_oclock_comes_by#

Whens 6 O'clock Comes - A short and gloomy look at the new life of Alice. (In refference to Alice in Wonderland).
A very dark piece of writing which Alice is depicted as a depressing, mentally ill girl, far from the idea of the happy Disney Alice character we are all use to.
The writer captivates you with the airy, sombre yet almost evil tone of the story.
The storyline was short and effective -although you seem to get thrown into the middle of a scene, the writing is clear and it is easy to make sense of what is going on.
We see just a snippet and are left with a cliff-hanger and I am dying to see how the story ends !