ENOUGH WITH THE LIES
“So how was Beverly Hills?" Ben asked. "As fun as Paris?"
he said, showing a picture he had found of his sister Jane under the Eiffel
tower. Her heart sank.
"Where did you get that?"
"I went in to your room to
see if you were there, and found it lying around. You need to stop lying. What
is going on, Jane?" Ben said.
Jane sighed. "Well, what do you
want to know?"
“I want to know the truth. I went in to
your work the other day and spoke with some guy who said you were in Beverley
hills attending a meeting.”
Jane sighed, patting the couch beside
her. Her brother sat next to her, ready to listen.
"Okay. You know how I had an
interview with Donovan Decker for my internship? Well Grey who is the director
of the company got confused and thought I was there for the executive assistant
position. I got the job on the spot and was going to tell her the truth,
but…"
"Yes?" Ben urged her.
"Yes?" Ben urged her.
Jane rolled her eyes and started to
explain. “I only took the position because, that was when you didn't have a
job. And we really needed the money, and Grey offered me $34,000 salary, and I
just… I couldn't turn her down. So, ever since then I've been running around
the city, leaving school early and getting Billy to drop me off. I would quit or
even tell them the truth, but I can’t!” Jane said, looking at her brother with
innocent eyes. "This is all I’ve ever wanted to do with my
life. This job just came, out of the sky landing itself in my lap, and if I
tell them the truth about me, I may never find a way back into the fashion
industry.”
Ben looked at Jane, feeling sorry for
her. He loved his sister, but he needed to punish her so that she understood that
she couldn’t keep lying to him like that. If he made her give up this job, she
would never forgive him. He sighed. "Jane, you're only seventeen. It feels
like you’re growing up too fast and I have a job now so I can afford to pay the
bills.”
Jane bit her lip. "But, this isn’t
about the money anymore! It's my dream job
and you know it! I am not keeping it
because we don't have any money. I'm keeping it because I love it! Please don't
make me give it up!" she pleaded.
Ben sat there a moment. "You do
realize I have to punish you. You're my little sister. It's my responsibility
to take care of you. You can't just run around the city pretending to be an
adult!"
Jane sat back, guilt bubbling in her
chest. "I'm so sorry, Ben! Ground me, take away my phone, my computer,
just, please, don't make me give up this job!"
Ben decided to drag the conversation
along more. “Hmm so what makes you think that you deserve the right to keep the
job? You lied to me and I don’t like liars and it’s going to be very hard for
me to trust you now.”
Jane stood up and started to cry. “Why
do you have to treat me like this Ben? Just because I lied to you once doesn’t
mean I will lie to you again. I had a legit reason behind my lies and just
explained why, but it looks like you don’t give a shit!”
Ben stands up in anger. “Excuse me but do
I need to remind you who the adult is in the family? Don’t you give me
attitude! I know I’m your brother but I have also been your legal guardian
since dad left. So if I were you I would just sit down and shut up.”
Ben takes in a deep breath and calms
himself down. “Oh and by the way I was just kidding around with you. Do you
really think I would take away your dream job from you? That would just be
insane and unfair. I understand your reason but I’m still angry at the fact
that you lied to me about it.”
Ben sighed and pointed at Jane.
“You’re grounded for two weeks. No partying, or going out for anything other
than work. And when you go out for work, you tell me where you are going and
don't do anything illegal or that you know you shouldn't do. I will let you
keep your phone but not the computer. You should consider yourself lucky that I
am being nice to you.”
Jane screams. "What? Are you serious? Please
tell me you’re not lying? You don’t know how much this means to me, I love you
so much! Thank you, and I’m so sorry for being rude, I was just upset.”
Ben then gets ready to drop Jane off to school and
waits for her while she packs her bag.
I've seen the first episode of this show, and I liked it :) I think you did a great job at capturing the relationship between Jane and her brother and I enjoyed the lighthearted conflict because it was resolved so easily.
ReplyDeleteWell done babe xo